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Annotated Bibliography: Josh

Deno, Stanley L. “EFFECTS OF WORDS AND PICTURES AS STIMULI IN LEARNING LANGUAGE EQUIVALENTS.” Journal of Educational Psychology 59(3) (1968): n. pag. APA PsychNET. American Psychological Association. Web. 24 Nov. 2014. <http://psycnet.apa.org/journals/edu/59/3/202.pdf>.

Stanley Deno is a PhD in educational psychology who has been studying the effects of pictoral language learning since the late 1960’s. His thesis is that image-based learning helps people learn language more quickly than word-based learning. In this specific case, he is looking at learning a second language. His intended audience is teachers and curriculum writers who hope to improve their ability to teach people language. Given how quick he is to dismiss conclusions that would even support his thesis, so long as they are within standard deviation, I would argue that the bias in this article is negligible.

The strengths of this article lie in its thorough transparency and its comprehensive results section. Everything that went in to this study is available to look at and criticize, so the results are under no suspicion as far as how they were reached. The results specifically indicate that pictoral learning offers specific benefits in terms of learning languages, which supports our thesis that our product would help people learn languages. This study is very relevant as far as a base outline for why the product would be beneficial, however, given that it is about learning a second language rather than a first, it is more useful in the context of the product aiding those who have already learned a language rather than children. That said, it doesn’t disqualify our notion that it would help children, rather it supports a secondary goal of ours.

 

Klinger, Walter. “EFFECTS OF PICTURES ON MEMORY & LEARNING.” EFFECTS OF PICTURES ON MEMORY & LEARNING (2000): n. pag. University of Shiga Perfecture. University of Shiga, 2000. Web. 28 Nov. 2014. <http://www.usp.ac.jp/english/pdf/wk00-EffectsPictures.pdf>.

Walter Klinger is a researcher for the University of Shiga and has been publishing papers since 1996. This paper is about what effects images as teaching tools have on learning. He concludes that they are very useful for teaching people who are unfamiliar with the subject matter they are being taught. He compares using them to instruct children to their effects on college students, and he concludes that children learn much better with images than adults, but the study doesn’t address adults who aren’t already familiar with the subject matter. It is consistent with his research that Panache could be used effectively for adult literacy as well as child literacy.

There is very little bias in the paper. He tends towards the middle, as his overall conclusion that images are helpful for some but not others. This kind of lack of lopsidedness indicates that there is likely very little bias. The strengths of this article lie in its child literacy support. It is a comprehensive, peer reviewed paper, and as such, it is at least somewhat reliable. There is information in the paper that both supports and opposes the objective of Panache. That said, most of the relevant information supports it, and the parts that refer to Panache’s weaknesses simply conclude that we shouldn’t expect it to be popular with groups that we hadn’t considered our audience.

 

Canning-Wilson, Christine. “Article 48: Visuals & Language Learning: Is There A Connection?” Article 48: Visuals & Language Learning: Is There A Connection? By Christine Canning-Wilson. Center for Excellence in Applied Research and Training (CERT College), Higher Colleges of Technology – Abu Dhabi, Feb. 2001. Web. 04 Dec. 2014. <http://www.eltnewsletter.com/back/Feb2001/art482001.htm>.

Christine Channing-Wilson has a masters degree and is a regularly invited speaker at conferences. She has been the chairperson of multiple academic committees and has been published numerous times in both article and book form. Her thesis is that there are unexplored capabilities of images in teaching language to non-native speakers. In her case, she specifically uses English in the United Arab Emirates. This article was written for people intending to teach second languages. It specifically references what kinds of visuals help in what contexts for language learning and why those kinds work better where they do.

Given the author’s seeming intent in writing this paper, there is definitely some chance for slant. The cited studies all appear to be unbiased, but given that the paper concludes on one side, there is definitely a chance for selection bias. Given the nature of the studies cited, though, it appears to be unbiased. The strengths of this article lie in its clarity. It uses charts and concise writing to summarize the points of the studies that it is citing. The information in this paper lean heavily in favor of our thesis. She concludes that “more emphasis should be put on the possibility that visual images affect how learners learn and how teachers teach.” This is extremely relevant to our project, as it directly supports the idea that Panache would be a valuable resource for teachers and students.

Synesthesia Annotated Bibliography Karen

Annotated Bibliography

Cytowic, Richard E. “What Color Is Tuesday? Exploring Synesthesia – Richard E. Cytowic.” YouTube. YouTube, 10 June 2013. Web. 23 Nov. 2014. <https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rkRbebvoYqI>.

Richard Cytowic is a well-known neurologist who has written and taught about synesthesia and was trained at Duke University, London’s National Hospital for Nervous Diseases and George Washington University. The author’s thesis is that synesthesia is beneficial for memorization and already a way in which people think. The author’s intended audience includes students and individuals interested in neurobiology and synesthesia.

Cytowic’s bias is trying to educate people about synesthesia and may not be including all of his opinion on its benefits and how there may be counter-arguments to this information. The strength of this video is that it explains the content with a lot of detail, explaining it visually so that it is easy to comprehend. Another strength is that with authority he can outline the results of his research. Yet, the source is limited as it is too short for Cytowic to expand on missing pieces of the research or specific results to prove this theory. It furthers the argument made for our final project because it mentions that people are predisposed to think in this way, and having a tool to boost this ability would therefore be successful. The video is relevant because gives more insight in to how synesthesia works, thus becoming a source of inspiration for the apps for the project. Moreover, it gives insight into the human brain and how the average person would transition well into utilizing synesthetic functions to learn. However, the source is not directly related to education and may be to general to draw any strong conclusions from.

Massy-Beresford, Helen. “How We All Could Benefit From Synesthesia.” The Guardian. The Guardian, 26 Apr. 2014. Web. 23 Nov. 2014. <http%3A%2F%2Fwww.theguardian.com%2Fscience%2F2014%2Fapr%2F27%2Fbenefit-synaesthesia-brain-injury-mental-decline>.

Helen Massy-Beresford is a freelance reporter, who writes about business, travel, lifestyle, science and technology and health. In the article How We All Could Benefit From Synesthesia, Massy-Beresford argues induced synesthesia could help with memorizing and learning information. She draws upon various compelling research results conducted across different universities and the predictions they have for the implications to further this argument. The author’s intended readers are those interested in neuroscience, health, ageing, psychology, biology and medical research, as seen through the topic tags that have been used for this article.

Massy-Beresford is not a researcher but a reporter on the findings and she seems to be fascinated by the results, which could imply that she may be overrating the possible repercussions of this research and she may not know the pitfalls of the studies. A strong factor of the article is that she draws upon quotes of authority figures in the scientific arena and explains the experimental process that the researchers went through to reach these conclusions.  Although, the article falls short of proposing counter-arguments or aspects of the research that could be limited to draw any grand relationships between learning and synesthesia. Another weakness is that the article fails to demonstrate the research and the specific method that was used to conduct the experiments. This article furthers our argument that memorization can be helped by inducing synesthesia on the non-synaesthete population. Although, it focuses more heavily on the results on how it can help the elderly and it doesn’t have evidence on how it can affect child education. Nevertheless, the article does mention the possible effect and future investment on pedagogical research because of scientific belief induced synesthesia can be beneficial.

Synesthesia Annotated Bibliography

“Reading with Your Ears: Readers’ Advisory and Audio Books.” Reference & User Services Quarterly. Vol. 37–50. American Library Association. 318–323. Web.

 

The author, Katie Mediatore, is library professional and has worked with a number of library associations. She specializes in reading trends and programming for adults. Mediatore explains the format preferences for listeners as well as what makes audio books so appealing to people who use them. She does this by proposing why people would need or want to use audio books as opposed to traditionally reading text. By using various examples and situations in which the user may prefer audio books, Mediatore is able to show that this medium is perhaps more relevant than previously thought. The casual nature of her writing suggests that her book is meant for the average reader and does not strive to be overly intellectual.

Due to her role as a library professional there may be a slight bias or over exaggeration on the popularity of audio books. She makes it sound as if audio books are more common place when in reality, it is probably more of a niche market. The strengths of this article is that it provides a number of reasons why someone would choose audio books in particular over reading. However, a weakness is that is does little to come up with theories about why audio books are still overshadowed by more popular mediums like books or kindles. In addition, her examples are highly theoretical, and there is no scientific support for her arguments. As a result, there is appears to be a lack of solid research and few quantifiable facts that can bolster her claims. The article still however definitely falls in line with our thesis because it shows how utilizing one of our other senses, hearing, has positively affected a number of people’s reading experience. With this, it is easy to claim that fully using synesthesia will garner the support from a number of readers. While the article focuses only on audio books and the sense of hearing instead of synesthesia as a whole, it still holds relevance by closely examining one particular form of medium that strays from the traditional reading experience.

 

Adam, Halley-Prinable. The Oculus Rift and Immersion through Fear. Bournemouth University, 2013. Web.

 

Halley-Prinable is an expert at using C++, Lua and Python. He primarily works as a game programmer but also works as a contract programmer to work on any project. In this book Halley-Prinable claims that the Oculus Rift may have a greater potential to be more immersive than a regular computer screen monitor. By attempting to quantify fear through heart rate monitors and using test subjects, he shows the extent of immersion from the Oculus Rift. The author’s intended audience is probably gamers although its research exceeds that of just gaming. It calls into question the idea of a true virtual reality and the effects that is has on people.

Being a game programmer, Halley-Prinable may be too quick to praise the Oculus Rift and want to promote the new gaming device. The strength is that the author uses a scientific approach to come up with an experiment that measures the effect of the Oculus Rift in a way that is more than pure speculation. Due to the nature in which he conducted his research, there are many arguments that are backed up with facts instead of unsubstantiated, bold claims. The weakness, however, is that it emphasizes the emotion of fear while ignoring any other effect the Oculus Rift could potentially have. Another weakness is that it mostly focuses on the difference between the Oculus Rift and a normal computer screen monitor. Comparisons to other mediums of engagement are largely ignored. It is also important to note that not all experiments are perfect. There will never be a perfect control and test group. Certain individuals may be more prone to fear than others resulting in swayed results. This book supports our theory that creating an experience that fully utilizes our sense can create a positive, immersive experience for all users. Despite the fact that the Oculus Rift only triggers the sense of sight and sound, the information provided still shows studies of levels of immersion that can help support our argument for a product rooted in the idea of synesthesia.

Annotated Bibliographies: White Space

Joram, Elana, Earl Woodruff, Mary Bryson, and Peter H. Lindsey. “The Effects of Revising with a Word Processor on Written Composition.” National Council of Teachers of English 26.2 (1992): 167-93. JSTOR. Web. 23 Nov. 2014. <http://ezproxy.library.nyu.edu:2100/stable/40171302>.

Elana Joram, Earl Woodruff, Mary Bryson, and Peter H. Lindsey, the authors of this journal, are all professors and a part of the National Council of Teachers of English.  As they are all educators, this journal article has the bias of educators; they are looking at the word processor as a way of improving the writing process. The article is very focused on the idea of a word processor verses the traditional pen and paper, and  the negative and positive affects of the word processor.  Because of this focus, the article seems to have been written by educators, for educators.

This article claims that word processors improve writing by making the revision process easier and simpler. Word processors make surface revision easy- they tell you when you spell something wrong, when your grammar is incorrect, etc. While they improve writing on the surface, they also discourage creativity. The National Council of Teachers of English composed a study in which they addressed the question of  whether word processors improve or detract from written composition. Word processors would either improve composition because make you revise through the writing process, or the revising would interfere with the composing process and detract from the final piece. They predicted, and later found to have predicted correct, word processors would get in the way and detract from the composing process. It was found that students focus more on surface level corrections when writing on word processors, while when they write with paper and pen they are less likely to correct small errors and focus on the piece of writing as a whole. The one weakness of this article, which clearly stood out, is that it is rather contradictory. It starts off saying word processors improve writing, and ends saying that they detracts from the writing process. This aside, this article is still beneficial to the creators of White Space because it highlights positive and negative aspects of the word processor.

Dalton, David W., and Michael J. Hannafin. “The Effects of Word Processing on Written Composition.” The Journal of Educational Research 80.6 (1987): 338-42. JSTOR. Web. 23 Nov. 2014. <http://ezproxy.library.nyu.edu:2116/stable/27540262>.

This article was written based off of a study done by the Journal of Educational Research. Dalton and Hannafin are both professors of educational psychology. Since they are both educators, the piece is heavily focused on how the word processor affects students rather than how it affects humans as a whole. The piece is a a psychology heavy study and was likely written for other psychologists studying education.

The article discusses the idea of how writing skills are approached- holistically or reductively. The holistic approach focuses on the process of writing rather than minute mechanics while the reductive approach focuses on punctuation, syntax, etc. The article claims that the holistic approach is more beneficial for low achievers who tend to be preoccupied on form rather than substance. Word processors have an effect on each of these approaches. In this study, there is a treatment group and a control group. The treatment group used word processors to complete written assignments three times a week while the control group used the traditional method of a pen and paper. The results of the study show that the use of the word processor had little impact on high achieving students, but was effective for low achieving students. I would say the weakness of this study is the date- it was conducted in 1987. However, this can still be helpful to the creators of White Space because the goal is to create a more simple word processor. If we do more research on what the word processor used at this time was, we will be able to see exactly how this affected those that were a part of the study and the benefits and detriments.

Purcell, Kristen, Judy Buchanan, and Linda Friedrich. “The Impact of Digital Tools on Student Writing and How Writing Is Taught in Schools.” Pew Research Center’s Internet American Life Project. Pew Internet, 16 July 2013. Web. 30 Nov. 2014.

This article is based on a survey done by Advanced Placement and National Writing Project teachers to see how today’s digital tools have impacted student writing. Purcell is the director of research at Pew Research Center’s Internet American Life Project and Buchanan and Friedrich are teachers. The teachers saw how digital technologies and social networking greatly affect teen’s personalities and creativity and how it encourages writing in more forms. The survey was given to teachers and is therefore has the bias of educators.

The majority of teachers surveyed believed that digital technologies have been beneficial to student’s writing processes. They believed that these technologies allow students to share their writing with a wider audience, encourage personal expression, and encourage collaboration among students. However, the survey also showed the concerns educators have with students using digital technologies. Since short-form writing has become so prevalent in the live’s of teenagers, this manages to slip into formal writing. Students tend to use informal language in formal writing assignments. Students are also more likely to slip into short-form writing styles if they are multi-tasking, like if they are writing a paper while simultaneously on social media. This study is helpful for the creators of White Space because of the distraction mode feature. The distraction mode shuts off the internet which, according to this study, would improve the writing styles of students.

The Effect of Word Processing on the Quality of Basic Writers’ Revisions

McAllister, Carole, and Richard Louth. “The Effect of Word Processing on the Quality of Basic Writers’ Revisions.” Jstor. Southeastern Louisiana University, Dec. 1988. Web. 22 Nov. 2014.

This article is based on a study across three college professor’s classes of a combined 102 students. The authors, Carole McAllister and Richard Louth, created and executed the study of the students and analyzed the results. The purpose of the study was to test out the hypothesis that a word processor improves a student’s ability to revise his/her paper. In the end the author claimed that the word processor improved a student’s ability to revise his/her work. The author’s intended audience is other researcher’s interested in word processor’s as well as student’s and teacher’s. The article is quite factual and includes many numbers and deviations that support the findings so there is no slant in the article.

The article has a lot of concrete evidence for its findings and supports its claim very well. At the end of the article, the authors qualify their findings in that the word processor might just create a change in mindset of the students rather than actually help with the writing. I viewed this as a strength of the article to know when to step back and explain to the reader the possible faults with your work. The weakness of the article was, as the author’s claimed, that they did not investigate why the word processor led to an increase in effectiveness for student’s revisions. The research in this article greatly helps our thesis because it shows the benefits of a word processor. Therefore, the article is extremely relevant to our paper and I can see us using the statistics and claims from this article in our final paper.

Annotated Bibliography

Kirschenbaum, Matthew. “This Was the First Word Processor Ever Used By a Novelist. It Weighed 200 Pounds and Had to Be Brought in Though the Window.” Slate Magazine. Slate Magazine, 1 Mar. 2013. Web. 21 Nov. 2014.

The author of this piece, Matthew Kirschenbaum, is the author of an upcoming work entitled Track Changes for the Harvard University Press, a book that chronicles much of the history of the word processor.  Kirschenbaum also teaches English at the University of Maryland and on occasion Skypes with first year writing seminars.  As an author and historian, Kirschenbaum has done extensive research on the word processor and has interviewed dozens of authors, programmers, and scholars of writing and the pedagogical nature of technology.  The article is primarily focused with revealing to the reader who the first individual was to use a word processor in writing a novel, citing Len Deighton as the author, with his assistant, Ms. Ellenor Handley as the one to do most of the actual typing.  Though the machine they used to create his WWII era novel Bomber (written in the late 60s and published in 1970) looked nothing like the word processors used today, IBM’s Magnetic Tape/Selectric Typewriter (MTST) was able to interpret keystrokes and store them on a magnetic tape and then print the document at 150 words per minute at the users request.  Bomber benefited significantly from this technology due to its complex nature and Deighton’s non-linear writing style.  Written for Slate Magazine’s website, Kirschenbaum’s audience is a relatively broad, but technologically literate community with readers similar to that of Wired or New York Magazine.

The slant present then, is one of someone who is well versed in these matters writing for an audience who is likewise aware of certain trends in that area.  Kirschenbaum himself has also stated that the title of first-author-to-publish-using-a-word-processor can vary dramatically depending on a wide array of criteria.  The critical weakness of the article is this grey area of categorization.  How do you define word processor?  Who actually wrote it, the author, or the typist? What if there was some unknown publisher in a less transparent nation that did it first?  However in coming down on one book, Deighton’s Bomber is as good as any.  As is apparent from his Kirschenbaum has done the best anyone ma do in this pursuit, including interviewing both Deighton and Handley for the piece.  The article supports our project in that it points to the importance of the word processor.  That someone would care enough to write a book researching the history of the technology shows its importance, in addition, though discovering Deighton’s use of MTST is not as relevant as George R.R. Martin revealing his use of WordStar, the article remains interesting, after all, everyone uses word processors now.  As for its use within the body of this paper, the article serves as a good starting point for the origin of the word processor gaining importance and momentum as big-name authors began to use it.

Pea, Roy D. “Cognitive Technologies for Writing.” Review of Research in Education 14 (1987): 277-326. JSTOR. Web. 21 Nov. 2014. <http://www.jstor.org/stable/10.2307/1167314?ref=no-x-route:a1d99e99512963867a6ea141c96cfd64>.

Roy Pea is one of the foremost scholars in implementing technology in education, he received his D.Phil. (PhD) in developmental psychology form Oxford University in 1978, and is currently a professor of Learning Sciences at Stanford University’s Graduate School of Education.  Learning and teaching through technology is what he does, and he does it well.  In what begins with an excellent quote from Ludwig Wittgenstein, “It is only the attempt to write down your ideas that enables them to develop,” his piece (written in conjunction with New York University Laboratory for Advanced Research in Educational Technology) focuses on how new writing technologies, specifically the word processor, benefit teaching and learning alike.  Pea points out at the time of publication (1987) writing technologies did not necessarily change what people wrote, only how they wrote it.  He then proposes, after outlining historical precedents, that with the wild growth of computing could come an increase in “Cognitive writing technologies,” technologies that would help put computing to the best use.  Pea is clearly writing for a well read audience, but one that is still learning about this area, and due to its publication in the American Educational Research Association Review, it is safe to assume that he is also writing for his peers.  At the time, writing technologies were relatively new for everyone, and Pea keeps the diction from becoming too erudite.  As long as the reader knows what “cognitive” means, they will be able to get by. 

The slant here comes from the fact that Pea is himself an educator writing for educators.  He claims early on that “[word processors] neither offer qualitative advances over previous tools in helping mature writers express or refine their thoughts, nor help novices develop better writing skills,” a point that even then could be argued in a variety of ways.  That being said, the whole purpose of the essay is to excite those possibilities and prompt educators and programmers alike to begin changing that statement.  Acceptance of the current state of affairs coupled with the drive to change them is a great strength of this piece, the weakness being the fact that it was written over 25 years ago.  It’s age does not, however, discredit it it entirely.  This piece will be of great use in showcasing how word processing technology has changed, and how White Space will continue to refine it. In a sense, this source is useful as both a support and a counter to our current thesis and in that way solidifies our argument even more.

A Brief History of Word Processing

Kunde, Brian. “A Brief History of Word Processing (Through 1986) / by Brian Kunde.” A Brief History of Word Processing (Through 1986) / by Brian Kunde. Stanford University, Dec. 1986. Web. 22 Nov. 2014.

This article was written by a college student at Foothills college in California. Brian Kunde, the author, worked at the Stanford University library for 26 years and is currently a library specialist. The author wrote this article to take the reader through the history of word processing and demonstrate how the need for a word processor arose. From the first moveable type in the middle ages to the typewriter that arose in 1872 to the more advanced word processors of the 60’s and 70s, Kunde demonstrates the evolution of the word processor. In a non-biased article, Kunde demonstrates to the reader, whom I assume is an educated college student, how the word processor has evolved.

The article is well-written and details many different technologies/examples of the word processor. However, the article could include more detail about technologies such as the invention of moveable type. The information in this article helps our research paper in that it takes us through the development of moveable type. However, the material isn’t as pertinent as it could be since the article was written in 1986. The article is a good starting ground for our research, but we will definitely need to do more.

 

Annotated Bibliographies

The following presentation will help you construct your annotated bibliography for this course (and can be used as a guide in the future). We will review this in class together.

http://www.slideshare.net/AmandaLicastro/annotated-bibliographies-41672179

 

You should post two entries on this site before Thanksgiving break, and continue to add entries as you research. You will collate these into a final document to be turned in with your final project. Please put these under the category “Final” and tag “bibliography.”

Use this worksheet as a guide:

Annotated Bibliography Worksheet

The purpose of an annotation is to summarize and evaluate a potential source for your research paper. Using the source you prepared for class, compose an annotation that answers the following questions in at least one to two paragraphs:

1) Who is the author, what is his/her authority or background?

2) What is the author’s thesis? What are the author’s main claims?

3) Who is the author’s intended audience?

4) Is there any bias or slant in the article?

5) What are the strengths and weaknesses of the article?

6) Does the information in this article support or counter the thesis of your research paper?

7) How relevant is this material in terms of your paper?