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Final Reflection Assignment

Final Reflection (pdf here)
Thinking and Writing Through New Media
Fall 2015

In Authentic Learning in the Digital Age: Engaging Students Through Inquiry, Larissa Pahomov writes, “For student reflection to be meaningful, it must be metacognitive, applicable, and shared with others,” and defines metacognitive reflection as taking the process of reflection “to the next level because it is concerned not with assessment, but with self-improvement: Could this be better? How? What steps should you take?” (read full article here). In light of this assertion, I would like you to write a metacognitive reflection on the final project. This reflection should address the following questions, with an aim to identify how you could improve your work.

1. How did you formulate a group contract, and why did you claim responsibility for the tasks you pledged to complete? Was this an effective approach? In retrospect, could you have divided the workload in a way that was more effective?

2. Describe your contributions to the final project in detail. What writing/research/design/management responsibilities did you take on in order to complete this project? How did you complete your individual contributions to the group? What steps did you take? What tools did you use? Did you meet your deadlines (why or why not)?

3. Did you feel like your contributions had a positive impact on the final project? Did you feel the other group members valued your contributions? Did the reactions of your group members (revisions, suggestions, critiques) help you develop your materials in a constructive way?

4. How do you feel you worked as a team? How did you facilitate communication and collaboration between the group members? What tools did you use? Can you suggest improvements for this process? What did you learn that would help you in future group work situations?

5. Imagine you were an audience member during your presentation and rate it on the same scale provided in class: research, innovation, creativity, clarity (1-10) and why?

6. And finally, what did you learn through the process of creating and presenting this project? How did this project help you synthesize and apply the topics we covered throughout the semester? Do you have suggestions to improve this assignment?

You may expand or add to these guidelines in any way you wish. This is your opportunity to speak directly to me about what you learned in this course.

This will be worth 25 points, and should be 3-5 pages in length (single spaced please). Please submit this as a Google Doc that you share with me upon completion. You must invite me as an editor (with privileges to edit, not just read or comment). This is due at 4:55pm on Wednesday, December 17, 2014.

“What Meaningful Reflection On Student Work Can Do for Learning.” MindShift. N.p., n.d. Web. 11 Dec. 2014.

3RD Annotated Bibliography

Page, Stanley R. “User Customization of a Word Processor.” Common Ground (n.d.): 340-46. Web. 3 Dec. 2014. <http://www.sigchi.org/chi96/proceedings/papers/Page/srp_txt.htm>.

The primary author of this paper, Stanley R. Page, worked for Novell Incorporated at the time of writing.  Not much was to be found concerning Mr. Page’s current status, however the Novell website is up to date and provides some insight into the author’s background.  From their homepage: “Novell supports thousands of organizations around the globe, delivering software that makes the workplace more productive, secure and manageable.”  The paper falls in line with this mission statement in that its objective was to find out what and how users change in their word processors.  Based on a study of 101 volunteers, the research team tracked on discs what changes users made to the software (WordPerfect 6.0a), responses to a questionnaire, and macro usage files.  Put simply, their findings were that, “92% of the participants in this study did some form of customization of the software. The maximum number of changes made by a participant was 54. The mean was 9.1. Eighty-six percent made changes to their general preferences settings.  Sixty-three percent made use of custom functionality in macros. Seventy-seven percent customized the software interface to add or change access to their functionality.” Though the piece may be somewhat out of date, in the past eighteen years, not much has changed in word processing outside of cloud storage and a few nifty tricks and features.  These numbers are most likely different today, however they are more than likely still representative of general trends in word processor usage.

The researchers’ audience for this study were originally those in attendance at the 1996 Conference of Human Factors in Computing, a conference that is still held today.  As the name implies, the conference focuses on how humans and our ever-present computers interact with one another, with an attendance base from across the computing spectrum.  The bias or slant present in the paper is minimal.  Though the authors are all involved in computing technology themselves, the paper remains easy to comprehend for those less versed in such vernacular.  The team set out to find out something they did not know, and were not out to prove anything, they write several times that the fact that 92% of users customize their processors to be surprising.

One of the main reasons this remains such an interesting and relevant study is that within it is contained a sampling of the word processor user demographics.  The researchers state that of those sampled, “57.4% having ten or more years of computer experience . . . 50.5% falling between the ages of 40 and 54 . . . 55.4% female and 44.6% male.” In addition the study provides a comprehensive analysis of what users changed and theorizes on why the changes were made.  Two of the key reasons cited for the desire to customize the word processor were that the user realized certain patterns or habits they had and wanted to facilitate these changes more, or that the user wanted to retrofit some new piece of software into an older version of the program.  These two user desires are key in developing White Space further in that once the user’s wants are more deeply understood, the product may react accordingly.  That said, it is important that White Space should do more than just provide users with what they know they want, to stay ahead of competition it is important to try new things, test ideas that have no assured demand, and create inventions that give the user something they didn’t even know they wanted.  Apple is a perfect example of this practice.  When the iPhone was launched in 2007, there were few if any metrics to depict how a smartphone would sell, but Apple took a chance, and now its product is one of the most widely used devices on the market.

Infrastructures of Labor

The presentation that I attended today dealt mainly with socials sciences and environmentalism. There were four different panelists. The first two talked about flood risk and wetlands. I found the last two, though, to be the most interesting.

One of them discussed the garbage situation in Senegal. The garbage collectors in that country began a string of protests for their poor compensation as well as lack of fair treatment. They are important members of the community and therefore wanted to be given greater respect. One of their biggest complaints is that their equipment tends to be inadequate. For example, the garbage trucks that they drive are usually broken hand-me-downs given to them from Europe. After they formed a union, they protested by leaving the trash on the streets. Many neighborhoods followed this example and began to leave their waste on the streets as well.

The other panelist talked about the dangers of lead poisoning. She opened her discussion by stating that most of the refuse found in landfills is from abandoned homes that were demolished. This leads to large concentrations of lead. A common misconception is that lead is safe when contained or surrounded by other materials. This is why men and women working in construction and home renovations will use lead and then apply a coat of paint over it without giving any second thoughts. The problems is that the lead still exists and when homes are destroyed, large concentrations of it can be found around the deconstruction zone. This proves to be a problem because lead is a material that is not easily broken down by dirt. Some have opted to use wet demolition which essentially sprays down the lead after the buildings are torn down. While this helps remedy the problem to some extent, the lead still poses risks to those around the deconstruction zones or landfills.

The reason I found the last two especially interesting and relevant to our class is because they bring up problems that affect many different communities and would be great subjects to discuss through social media. I find it sad that social media has become powerful enough to drive change, but some issues get overshadowed by the ones with better coverage. I think that people can contribute in helping solve these problems easily with the power of the internet. One of the biggest fads these days is called clicktivism. Even does not take much effort to help spread a message across the web. People can help others become more aware simply by liking different news stories or sharing them.

Infrastructures of Labor – Extra Credit

I have never found urban development and planning an interesting topic. But, this event hosted by the Urban Democracy Lab at NYU was not only fascinating and eye-opening, but it also supplemented and complemented much of the content in this course regarding technology and its effects.

The event was centered on four guest speakers: Kafui Attoh, Rosalind Fredericks, Malini Ranganathan and Catherine Fennell, who were moderated by Penny Lewis. Each of these speakers presented for 15 minutes on a topic of their choice that related to the friction caused between the government and the urban dwellers in matters of infrastructure.

Kafui Attoh focused on the issue of transit workers. There is a “speeding up” in public transit as drivers’ spot time and recovery time is shortened. A spot time is one where a driver would have time to eat and rest before resuming work again. A recovery time is one where drivers prepare for their next shift and adjust. Now these times are being shortened because of delays and longer routes. If a worker is delayed, he will have a shorter spot time. He would only have a few minutes to relax and use the bathroom. As a result, the health of these workers are being affected as they cannot properly use the bathrooms and don’t have proper access. I think Attoh’s argument is interesting because it shows how today’s fast-paced, technological society does not consider its toll upon human labor. Present in our industrialized society is the erroneous conception that human labor can perform at the same level as machines. But, as Attoh points out, this is impossible. Humans cannot function at the same level as capital. We have explored this relationship between machines and humans and the impact of an increasingly technological culture in our reading of ‘The Machine Stops’ by E.M. Forster and ‘Fahreheit 451’ by Ray Bradbury, which show that technology can have a dehumanizing effect on people. Technology plays a pivotal role in our lives to the extent that it  guides and dictates our lives.

In addition, Malini Ranganathan presented on the stormwater drains of Bangalore (Bengaluru), India. According to Ranganathan, these drains are “socio-natural assemblages”. Floods are becoming increasingly common in this city, heightening the need for proper and efficient stormwater drains. But storm drains are not as efficient as one may hope in Bangalore. It is clogged by waste from the surrounding areas. Worse, the most serious floods occur in areas of the city that have the poorest maintenance. What I gathered from Ranganathan’s presentation was that today’s technology needs to concentrate further on infrastructure that is beneficial to its residents. They need better drainage systems and innovative technologies that help in waste removal, to provide a cleaner environment. Ranganathan provides a fresh perspective for this course, because we have discussed about the greater dangers and consequences of technology on our society in the present and future, but we have not discussed in further detail about how new technology can be used to affect a change for the better or worse in the environment.

In a similar vein, Rosalind Fredericks discusses the situation of trash in Dakar, Senegal. Her main area of focus was the ways in which technology influences infrastructure. She also aimed to explore how governments assert their power through infrastructures “as they often crystallize uneven development and unjust power relations.” According to Fredericks, materiality, in this case, garbage forms a key discourse into how developing technologies influence infrastructure. In Dakar, there have been numerous volatile institutional reorganizations regarding the city’s trash. There have been intense movements that have formed around the policy of waste. Unions of trash workers have protested various times. But in more recent times, such protests are now characterized by public dumping that occurs as form of showing solidarity. In Frederick’s opinion, governing garbage disposal has been a key form of asserting state power as government engage in anti-union practices and “low-tech infrastructural formulas.” Consequently, more burden is placed on human labor to collect and dispose trash. Frederick’s argument is very relevant in terms of our course in that she discusses how through technology and infrastructure, states impose and dominate over society. In the works of dystopia and discussions that we have had in class, it is apparent that technology is an important tool of the government as they force obedience and subjugation in society.

Lastly, Catharine Fennell spoke about Detroit’s infrastructure problems. Although she made several significant points, one of her most noteworthy arguments was the using of lead in infrastructure. She highlighted that there has been an increasing use of lead in construction and in demolition practices (use of wrecking balls, which are made of lead. Because of this widespread application, people are constantly exposed to the harmful effects of lead.  This is especially true in the case of children who may unintentionally chew on materials containing lead. What’s particularly terrifying is that developers and infrastructure companies frequently claim that lead is not harmful, resulting in a misinformed public who are exposed to risks that they didn’t intentionally create. Through such a discussion, Fennell aims to fuel a discourse that would make lead a public matter and provoke collective action against such detrimental practices. Fennell’s articulation is very similar to the article ‘The Geology of New Media’ by Jussi Parikka, that we read for class. In that article, Parikka analyzed how elements used in our present technology could cause potentially harm our environment and our health when they are improperly disposed. He provides the examples of Benzene  trichloroethylene and Freon which “are not necessarily “things” we associate with digital media cultural ephemerality, but they are some of the historical examples of health hazards caused from production of disk drives.”

 

 

Scarlett Curtis Third Annotated Bibliography – Panache

Borges, Jose, Morales, Israel, Rodriguez, Nestor J. Page Design Guidelines Developed through Usability Testing. University of Puerto Rico – Mayaguez Campus. n.d. Web. 30 November 2014. http://www.ece.uprm.edu/hci/papers/Chapter.pdf

I was unable to find any information on Borges, Morales or Rodriguez as I am assuming they are all Puerto Rican professors with little to no internet presence. The paper was written under the authority of the University of Puerto Rico which is the largest and most diverse public university in Puerto Rico. I therefore felt it was a trustworthy source and worth incorporating into my research.

The author’s thesis centres around a worry that individual website creators with little design knowledge are creating more and more web pages with poor usability and that hinder the use of the websites in general. The authors then go on to describe in detail steps that web designers can take to improve the usability, navigation, appeal and overall design of their website. They focus a lot on research and studies about web design and include a lot of factual evidence behind all of their points.

The author’s intended audience is anyone interested in web design but especially those who may not have a rich background in the field or are interested in looking at the research behind web design and not just one persons opinion.

Unlike a lot of articles about web design that include a lot of personal opinion on behalf of the author, this article is fairly un biased. The authors of the paper are looking extensively at research, facts and figures regarding web design and are not simply relying on what they think looks nice.

This article is very strong in that it provides a lot of evidence for each of the points that the author is making. However its weaknesses come in the large, dense chunks of information full of computer jargon. The article sets out to be a guide for beginner web designers in how to set up a site however it is often very hard and confusing for a beginner to get through.

This article supported much of our thesis in that it provided evidence and factual research for many of the aspects of web design that we thought made a successful website especially highlighting how important navigation is to a website that aims to store a large amount of information.

For the Design Features section of our paper this source was very useful. As I’ve said before it’s hard to find good sources about web design on the internet as they all seem to be so personal but it was really useful to see such in depth research on subjects we were so interested in like where the header should be and how to organise categories. We used this source to guide us and to back up some of the points we made in regard to our website’s design.

Third Annotated Bibliography Entry, White Space

Morello, Robert. “Five Tips for Marketing to College Students.” Small Business. Houston Chronicle, n.d. Web. 06 Dec. 2014.

Robert Morello is a Columbia graduate, a writer, and professor of travel and tourism. He has also worked in marketing and consulting. This article stems more from his marketing experience. “Five Tips for Marketing to College Students” is a condensed set of ideas for companies of all fields to use in their marketing toward people of college age. The intended audience is small companies looking to market their brand toward young adults and especially college students. The five ideas stated in the article are: “Follow the Money,” focusing on parents that fund college students, “Get Them Involved,” acknowledging the importance of interactivity between the product and the consumer through social media and advertising, “Harness Enthusiasm,” which is essentially playing off of young people’s avoidance of mainstream anything, “Giveaways,” using free swag to get the company’s name out there, and “Responsibility,” associating the company with causes that college students believe in in order to win their moral approval as an establishment. Morello claims that these five advertising techniques are key to marketing toward college students.

This article provides some interesting ideas for marketing techniques, but only gives a general overview of ways to execute the ideas presented. It would benefit the reader more to have included some input from actual college students rather than just present an idea of how they think. The article does have the bias of an author who is thinking primarily of how to generate revenue, which works for making money but can create a superficial tone for the company in my view. The article suggests harnessing student ambassadors to spread the word about the company, but I have seen this happen before and it makes for a weird, kind of forced social exchange between student ambassadors and their peers that makes for a weird image of the company. Overall I think the most useful part of the article is the piece about giveaways. We had considered this before, but in a more restricted way than suggested in the article. Morello provides the idea of giving out living essentials to college students, for example hairbands, toothbrushes, or phone wallets, to keep the company’s name in mind when students are using these items. I think White Space would benefit most from this kind of advertising, making this article relevant to our paper, even if just by this blurb.

Annotated Bibliograpy

Hale, Joanna, Jacqueline M. Thompson, Helen M. Morgan, Marinella Cappelletti, and Roi C. Kadosh. “Better Together? The Cognitive Advantages of Synaesthesia for Time, Numbers, and Space.” Cognitive Neuropsychology 31.7-8 (2014): 545-64. Taylor & Francis Online. Web. 28 Nov. 2014. <http://ezproxy.library.nyu.edu:2452/doi/full/10.1080/02643294.2014.967759#.VHj7SDHF83Q>.

 

All of the contributors to the article come from psychology departments at American universities. The authors argue that there is a difference between the magnitude and sequence accounts of TNS (time, numbers, and space) synaesthesia, and that the difference is clarified somewhat in there experiment. It seems that their intended audience regards mostly other psychologists and psychology scholars who cannot clearly decide upon which account is more veritable in the broader scheme of synaesthetes. It seems as if the experiment was conducted with direct intentions for results, yet bias is not apparent in the paper, nor in the trials themselves. The experimenters set up multiple control groups to compare with the TNS synaesthetes which made for some interesting results and a more accurate conclusion to be drawn, yet it could have gone more in-depth with its analysis of those other test subjects (grapheme-color synaesthetes and non-synaesthetes). The information in the article provides a wealth of background information for our technical specs. section and does not refute any claims we intend to make, while instead clarifying a specific type of synaesthesia for our group.

 

 

Kay, Collette L., Duncan A. Carmichael, Henry E. Ruffell, and Julia Simner. “Colour Fluctuations in Grapheme-colour Synaesthesia: The Effect of Clinical and Non-clinical Mood Changes.” British Journal of Psychology(2014): n. pag. Wiley Online Library. Web. 28 Nov. 2014. <http://ezproxy.library.nyu.edu:2153/doi/10.1111/bjop.12102/full>.

 

The article’s contributors all work in Psychology departments of two Universities in the UK (University of Edinburgh and University of Sussex). The authors conducted a series of experiments testing grapheme-color synaesthetes and attempting to find a correlation between mood and the colors they experience. As it turns out, the evidence supports the claim that mood does in fact alter the colors they perceive (noted by a change in luminance). The article is intended for other scholars of psychology along with those interested in this field of research. Considering that the article is actually a publication of a science paper, the only room for bias is in the fact that it’s possible the authors drew more on correlation rather than causation, yet they do not make any claims that surpass what their evidence supports. The article offers a great deal of experimental details about grapheme-color synaesthetes, but lacks personal anecdotes or experience as it is essentially a lab report. I believe it does not deny anything our research paper intends to do, and actually extends the believability of our invention and the feasibility in many ways too. It seems relevant to our investigation considering it could provide useful information when looking at how our device could alter the moods of its users, along with their general brain functions.

Rouw, Romke, and K. Richard Ridderinkhof. “The Most Intriguing Question in Synesthesia Research.” Cognitive Neuroscience 5.2 (2014): 128-30.Taylor & Francis Online. Web. 7 Dec. 2014. <http://ezproxy.library.nyu.edu:2452/doi/full/10.1080/17588928.2014.906400#tabModule>.

Both of the authors of this journal source work together at the University of Amsterdam’s center for the study of adaptive control in brain and behavior. Rouw and Ridderinkhof gathered information on the current analysis of synesthesia and put forth a broad, yet still unanswered question: “Why do most synesthetes *not* get confused by their additional sensations?” In the piece, they intend to clarify the boundaries of this question, in addition to attempting to answer it. The findings of the article extend past those in psychology departments around the world as it also begins to put together an even bigger question of personal realities and the lack of objectivity within them.  Dealing with a heavily subjective topic, one would think there would be room for bias, yet the authors handle the research with scientific treatment and was tormented with quite a large amount of peer review before  being released to the database. One of the major values of this source is that it answers questions that could worry our target audience and settles some fears of unwanted imaginative realities for children. It provides a great deal of detail about multiple types of synesthesia too, and mostly seems to focus on Grapheme-color synesthesia (like we will be doing in our presentation).

Cesco’s Annotated Bibliography

McDonnell, Andrea P., Leanne S. Hawken, Susan S. Johnston, JaimeeE. Kidder, Marjorie J. Lynes, and John J. McDonnell. “Emergent Literacy Practices and Support for Children with Disabilities: A National Survey.” EDUCATION AND TREATMENT OF CHILDREN 37 (2014): 495-530. Print.

All the contributors to the article are professors, associate professors, graduate assistants and deans of the Special Education Department of the University of Utah. The authors’ thesis is that emergent literacy is a key element in reading comprehension that needs to be addressed immediately. The main focus of the paper is the impact of various pedagogical strategies on children with many different disabilities ranging from reading comprehension issues to deafness and blindness. The authors’ intended audience is clear to be both students researching this topic as well as educators in the field who could pick different teaching strategies based on the findings of this study. The bias in the article appears to be that the authors believe something needs to be done for students with any type of disability, in contrast with some educators who believe that some of these disabilities are inexistent. One of the potential weaknesses of the article is the relatively low response rate from the sample size (about half). Another weakness is that the survey showed which strategies the teachers were willing to implement, rather than the results of the implementation. This material is especially relevant to our product research because it shows that our product would be used especially in classrooms where children had disabilities. The study supports our thesis because the instructor’s willingness to use new methodologies shows there is a need in the market for instructional tools.

Narang, Susheela, and Raj K. Gupta. “THE EFFECT OF MULTIMODAL REMEDIAL TECHNIQUES ON THE SPELLING ABILITY OF LEARNING DISABLED CHILDREN.”INTERNATIONAL JOURNAL OF SPECIAL EDUCATION 29.2 (2014): 84-91. INTERNATIONAL JOURNAL OF SPECIAL EDUCATION. INTERNATIONAL JOURNAL OF SPECIAL EDUCATION. Web. 23 Nov. 2014. <http://www.internationaljournalofspecialeducation.com/>.

The authors are both professors at the University of Panjab in Chandigarh, India. Their thesis is that spelling is closely tied to reading ability and, as mentioned in the previous article, is something that needs to be addressed at an early age. The study uses three methods of instruction, one tactual and visual, another solely visual and the last auditory, visual and vocal. All three activities used flashcards with words and drawings to help the disabled students get a better grasp on the structure of certain vocabulary. Same as in the last study, the audience appears to be both students in the field as well as “special educators, teachers and parents, as in this
study an effort has been made to see the effectiveness of training in very important area, which has a direct bearing upon the education of children.” (Narang & Gupta) The only slant I was able to incur when reading the study was a belief in the legitimacy of these disabilities (which I personally believe in but many discredit). The authors themselves stated the weakness of their study: the small sample size (39 students broken up into groups of threes). The findings of this study support our thesis that visual aids can have a positive impact on children with learning disabilities and their learning. The students gained “increased confidence” and “willingness to perform;”— exactly what we’d like to see from our product. This material was equally relevant as the last in our research for the project because it shows that importance of visual aids in children’s pedagogy.

Burrell, A, Sodan A. C. “Web Interface Navigation Design: Which Style of Navigation-Link Menus Do Users Prefer?” Data Engineering Workshops. 2006, Atlanta, GA. Atlanta, GA: IEEE, 2006. Print.

The authors of this research paper are two computer science professors from the University of Windsor in Canada. Their authority derives from their background as instructors in the computer field. The goal of the research paper was to implement a series of different website navigation designs and test which were the most preferred by a series of participants. Their hypothesis was that “certain navigational styles are better for usability than others” (Burrell, Sodan). They claimed that existing literature at the time made them believe that left-hand side navigation was best, but their findings contradicted this initial statement. It’s also important to note that they didn’t adopt this as their own hypothesis, only acknowledged that this was a previous finding. The intended audience for the paper appears to be students in computer science departments, other instructors, and all website developers. I couldn’t find any bias or slant in the paper other than the hypothesis, which was that certain navigation layouts were better than others. I can postulate that as computer science professors (and possibly developers outside of school) they had some vested interest in proving that certain navigation layouts were preferable, although I couldn’t imagine how. I didn’t find any websites attributed to their name online to confirm or disprove this. The strength of the article is that they had 6 different fully-functioning test sites for the users to try, so they weren’t limited in options. Another strength was a varied age demographic in their sample—they didn’t limit it to younger students or older individuals. The weakness, as in the other research papers, lies in the small sample size (30), as well a requirement for the tested individuals to have a basic knowledge of computers and the Internet. It is possible that the results would have been different had they sampled individuals that didn’t know their way around a website. The research presented in this paper confirms our research regarding design because we, also, decided to place the navigation on the top and left of the screen—the top three results of the study for effectiveness. This paper is very relevant to our project when looking at how we decided to present the information on our website. It’s especially relevant because our product doesn’t just have a website as an auxiliary source, it itself resides on a website. It’s important to note that this study is from 2006, before this type of information became common knowledge to most, if not all, Internet users. It is still relevant, however, because it is good to know that users prefer this based on scientific research, not just habit.

SynesthEasy Annotated Bibliography

Radvansky, Gabriel A., Bradley S. Gibson, and M. Windy McNerney. “Synesthesia and Memory: Color Congruency, Von Restorff, and False Memory Effects.” Journal of Experimental Psychology: Learning, Memory, and Cognition 37.1 (2010): 219-29. PsycARTICLES. Web. 27 Nov. 2014.

The authors of this article are Gabriel A. Radvansky, Bradley S. Gibson and M. Windy McNerney. Radvansky is a professor in the Department of Psychology at University of Notre Dame. Gibson is an associate professor in the same department at University of Notre Dame. McNerny was a doctoral student under the direction of Dr. Radvansky at time of publication, but has since earned her PhD in Cognitive Psychology. In this article, the authors aim to show how synesthesia influences memory performance with regards to word lists that produce the experience of synesthesia. The authors claim that synesthetes place more emphasis on item-specific than relational processing. Memory performance is enhanced because this method allows to specifically target a particular memory during recall. In other words, memory retrieval is more organized around distinct features of each item rather than their similarities. The author’s intended audiences are psychologists and other academic professionals.

As the article was in the form of a study conducted by the authors, there was no bias. The authors were objective, providing both arguments and counter-arguments in the article. The article accurately concluded that people with synesthesia recall more words from lists than others, but have difficulty processing words with incongruent colors. The authors also clarify that synesthetes do not have an overall superior memory than others but just for items that elicit photisms. The weaknesses of this article were that it only focused on word lists and not on more complex forms such as sentences and narratives. Thus, it only shows one aspect of memory in synethetes. Moreover, the article only focuses on those 18 years and older. It does not show the effects of such studies on children and senior citizens with synesthesia, who have problems with memory recall. However, the article supports the thesis of our project which is that people with synesthesia have better memory and inducing synesthesia can have positive effects on the performance of an individual. The information presented in this article is very significant because not only does it show the positive effects of synesthesia but also points out some of its problems such as difficulty of synesthetes in recalling words with incongruent colors, that we seek to avoid or improve.

Colizoli, Olympia, Jaap M. J. Murre, and Romke Rouw. “Pseudo-Synesthesia through Reading Books with Colored Letters.” PLoS ONE 7.6 (2012): 1-10. PLoS ONE. PLOS, 27 June 2012. Web. 27 Nov. 2014.

The authors of this article are Olympia Colizoli, Jaap M.J. Murre and Romke Rouw. Colizoli is a professor of Brain and Cognition in the Department of Psychology at University of Amsterdam. Murre is also a professor of Brain and Cognition in the faculty of Social and Behavioral Sciences at University of Amsterdam. Rouw is also a professor of Brain and Cognition in the Department of Psychology at the same university. In this article, the authors aim to examine if it is possible to produce synesthetic-like experience of synesthetes to enhance learning. They also intend to examine the effects of learning synesthetic associations in non-synesthetes. The authors claim that synesthesia is not necessarily an innate, genetically inherited trait. Features of synesthesia are present in early toddlers and synesthesia is also influenced by environmental factors. The intended audiences of the authors are other professors of psychology and academic professionals.

The authors are more inclined towards the benefits that synesthesia provides. There is hardly any discussion on the problems that synesthesia causes such as the difficulty in identifying words with incongruent colors and the challenge to interpret the magnitude of certain numbers. The article is effective in explaining the potential benefits of learning and adapting synesthesia. However, the studies are pretty inconclusive because they don’t observe the long-term effects of induced synesthesia and if it activates the same neural connections as it does in synesthetes. The article supports our thesis as it demonstrates that it is possible to teach people to experience and learn like synesthetes. It is very relevant to our paper because it is shows possible ways of teaching synesthesia that are congruent with our product.

Yaro, Caroline, and Jamie Ward. “Searching for Shereshevskii: What Is Superior about the Memory of Synaesthetes?” The Quarterly Journal of Experimental Psychology 60.5 (2007): 681-95. Web. 4 Dec. 2014. <http://dx.doi.org/10.1080/17470210600785208>.

Caroline Yaro is a research assistant in the Institute of Child Health at University College London. Jamie Ward is a professor in the Department of Psychology at the same university, whose main research interest includes synaesthesia. In this article, the authors aim to study to what extent a powerful memory is a characteristic of synesthetes and to explain this difference with respect to the cognitive workings of the memory system in the brain. The authors claim that people with synesthesia have better memory for stimuli that induce synesthesia in comparison to stimuli that do not. They also claims that synesthesia usually possess a far superior memory is because of their better memory and perception of color. The intended audiences of the authors are other professors of psychology and academia in the sciences.

The article is objective and displayed no bias as the authors evaluated both the advantages and disadvantages of synesthesia. The strengths of the article are its explanation of how synesthesia operates in the brain and how it heightens memory of synesthetes. They clearly show the potentiality of synesthetic elements being simulated in non-synesthetes for enhanced memory and perception. However, the authors only tested the elements of synesthesia in the synesthetes for better memory but did not test non-synesthetes that were trained with synesthetic elements. This would have allowed a better understanding whether the superior memory in synesthetes in innate or acquired. The information in the article supports our thesis as it verifies that synesthesia results in a superior memory and perception. The article is very relevant for our paper because it provides us with a cognitive understanding of synesthesia to explain the phenomenon.

 

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Max, Velmans. “PHYSICAL, PSYCHOLOGICAL AND VIRTUAL REALITIES.” University of London 45–60. Web.

 

Max Velmans is a professor at the University of London working in the Department of Psychology. Being an expert in psychology, he is well qualified in discussing the neurological effects of virtual reality. Velmans believes that the effects of virtual reality and its experiences far differ from that of physical and even psychological reality. The author’s main audience seems to lean towards students majoring in psychology or any others working in that field. With its above-average terminology and usage of diagrams to explain its arguments, this article is most likely not geared for the average reader.

Being a psychologist, the author may over analyze the differences between the different realities. Although I understand that there may be slight neurological and cognitive differences in the varying experiences, I also think that if a theoretical perfect virtual reality were to exist, the differences would be more negligible than what the author is proposing. Other than that, it tends to be more wrapped up in definitions making the whole article surprisingly neutral as a whole. Perhaps the greatest strength of this article is that it touches upon all five senses. He explains the projections of virtual reality on people through the different senses that are triggered. The article is extremely thorough and does a great job defining the different realities as well as explaining what it truly means to be in a virtual reality. However, it is also very concerned with definitions. While it helps better our understanding of virtual reality, or group will get no opinions, case studies or examples to further illustrate our cause. For the most part, it supports our thesis that virtual reality will give its users a unique experience, but because the author spends so much time defining terminology, the article tends to be quite neutral. Still, this article is very appropriate for our paper because it explores all the different ways something can be a virtual reality. By focusing on the projections working on our senses, the article becomes even more relevant as we are talking about synesthesia.

 

J.D., Sartain. “Virtual Reality Gets Real.” N.p., 24 Sept. 2012. Web.

 

The author, J.D. Sartain, is a simple freelance journalist and therefore is not affiliated with any organization. The author does not have real thesis or stance but simply presents the various forms of virtual reality that already exist. The author’s intended audience is the average user and anyone who wants to find out more about virtual reality technology. The article is supplemented by an easy-to-use slideshow that has images and small paragraphs of text to supplement each picture. The presentation is simple meaning that the author wants his article to be easily accessible.

As I mentioned before, the article takes no real stance on virtual reality. It simply presents facts about the virtual reality technologies that are either in development or have already been released. Being a simple journalist without a psychological or scientific background, I cannot see him swaying the information in any way. The strengths of this article is that is has no bias and that it also presents an easy-to-read list of virtual reality technologies. It gives eleven different examples of devices and programs that utilize virtual reality giving readers a broad understanding of the way science is pursuing this field of study. On the other hand, the author has no scientific background and the article does little to go in depth with this topic. Aside from just referring to the article for examples of technology, it does not add much for our paper. The article does not really support nor negate our thesis. It does, however, still hold relevance as we would obviously want to compare our project with technologies that already exist. With this information we can fine tune our product by looking at what is already available and how our technology can offer something different.