Scratch
Progess in video so far
(some parts don’t align with the scratch as they are still subject to change)
This video should have been uploaded to bilibili and Chinese subtitile should have been added.
Something I think that can be IMPROVED:
The pace of talk, maybe a bit slow, not fitting the urgency of young people.
The tone of talk, maybe a bit low, and lack of varying intonations, that may sound sleepy.
The part from interviewee is redundant, could be shorten to a sentence or two, then combined with quick analysis.
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