A.Concept & Story
The project aims to dive into the intricate emotions of daily lives by capturing and piecing together the subtle details that make up our existence. The concept is exemplified by a story about departure. The main protagonist experienced a significant other’s leaving and the project documents the process of him coping with the loneliness and healing. For instance, he wandered to different places to clear his mind, went to parties to try to forget and to seek for emotional detachment, and eventually ended up in church to find ultimate peace and hope the superior power could save him from his sorrow.
We were inspired by both the art pieces we have watched/read as well as by our own experiences with departures, or just negative emotions in general. We want to emphasize on how sorrow is like a soft punch. It never hits you strongly, but permeates into every single detail of your life until you suffocate.
The ideation process of this project was quite simple. Me and my partner arrived at something quite general at first. We both aspired to create something that is set up in a sad mood and use storytelling to reflect the inner sentiment. Then we started looking for materials for the audio – poems, movie dialogues, or novel excerpts that best fit for what we wanted to express. Eventually we used “Elm” by Sylvia Plath. It is a poem that talks about the haunting and introspective exploration of themes such as mortality, despair, and the fragility of humans. The imageries are very powerful and there are a lot of metaphorical lines that could assist with the visual creations.
The main objective of this project is to create something that reflects how we often feel over the course of ups and downs in life. It is common to experience negative emotions in life and we want to use the story to cast light on the memories and stories we might share with the audience.
B.Creation Process & Execution
Storyboard – To -Shots
The storyboard provides a more specific setup of shots that we could create visually to achieve what we want to express. During the shooting of the project, the storyboard streamlines the process and makes the shooting way more smooth and planned.
We want to shoot during daytimes and nighttimes. For daytimes, we want to find a place with natural lighting and in a more broad setting. Therefore, we located the Binjiang park in Shanghai and picked a sunny Sunday for the shoot. The overall quality is satisfying and the natural lighting is perfect. During nighttime, I tried to find places that not only indicate that it is at night, but also with sufficient lighting sources (maybe neon lights) to ensure the quality.
For one scene we need people to shake the camera horizontally in a dark-neon setting. It was hard to manage because everyone’s motions were different and it was extremely difficult to control the camera angle. Luckily, we were able to fix the problem during the production/editing process. We phased out the different clips of shaking to dodge the inconsistency problem and used techniques to minimize the unstable movement of the camera. Another challenge we encountered is to make sure there was no random pedestrians in the camera frame. We picked a park that is very crowded, especially during the weekend. So there were a lot of people walking by and sometimes they accidentally walked into the frame. What we did was to zoom in the camera a little bit and try to inform people in advance to avoid walk-in accidents. We also tried to shoot multiple times for one shot and edit them out.
The editing & post-production process was very iterative. We would implement our ideas first and then change scene-by-scene based on the feedback. For instance, primarily I used a lot of black and white effects in the first version, but it didn’t go quite well and interfered the overall story delivery to the audience. Therefore in the final version we only kept the walking towards the camera part as black & white. We were able to illustrate the color aesthetics of our original shots as well. Besides, we also fixed a bunch of small flaws such as the audio volume, credits, the quality of the filter.
C.Collaboration
Our filming project showcases a highly collaborative and dynamic process. Together with Yasmin, we embarked on capturing shots and exploring different creative possibilities. By working side by side during the shooting phase, we were able to combine our skills and perspectives to bring our vision to life. We each took the initiative to edit our own versions, allowing to compare and select the best shots for the final version. This approach ensured that we considered multiple viewpoints and made informed decisions.
In addition to editing, I took the responsibility of organizing and cleaning the files, ensuring that the project remained organized and all the shots were ready for editing. Meanwhile, my partner played a crucial role in selecting the audio text and handling the casting.
The process highlights the power of collaboration in filmmaking, showcasing how combined efforts are necessary to a successful project. Besides, it is always inspiring and interesting to hear from others about creative ideas.
D.Aesthetics & Results
In our project, we carefully considered the aesthetics to convey our concept and story effectively. For camera language. By using different shots, we aimed to amplify the sense of loneliness experienced by the protagonist. Wide shots emphasized their isolation within the surroundings, while close-ups captured their emotional state. Additionally, we employed shaky cameras to create a first-person perspective, allowing viewers to immerse themselves in the character’s experiences. This technique added a sense of immediacy and vulnerability, heightening the emotional impact.
We also experimented with various filters and effects to find the ones that best aligned with our reference aesthetics. Whether it was desaturated tones to convey melancholy or warm hues to evoke nostalgia, the color grading choices enhanced the emotional resonance of our story.
The tone and pace of the video were carefully considered during the editing process. We edited the church scene to build towards a climax in the final version. Through precise cuts and alterations in audio, we created a sense of tension and anticipation leading up to the climax.